Documentary Unit | Editing The Intro

From the outset of this project I had suggested having an opening montage to bring the audience in to the documentary, the montage would consist of various different fads, diet hacks etc that were designed in a way to mislead and fool the viewer into thinking getting healthy is easier than it actually is. This is something I like to think I adhered to rather well in my attempt at making an intro for the documentary, I also ensured I used only royalty free music, available for free download at the http://www.incompetech.com website. Below one can see both a screenshot of the editing process, as well as the finished intro that I came up with. I have received positive feedback from the group regarding the intro and am looking forward to evolving and tweaking it moving forwards. 

"Big Fat Lies" - Intro Attempt 1