First Script Draft | Isolation (2016)
On the 26th of October our first draft for our 10 page script submission was handed in, the script itself can be viewed by clicking the link below:
https://www.docdroid.net/ygLlxoV/script-isolation-1.pdf.html
Considering this is my first draft I was actually quite happy with how it came out, and I patiently awaited Steve Coombes' 1 to 1 feedback session in order to gain a better grasp at what was good and what could be improved in order to sustain a neat, interesting and unique flow from beginning, middle and end; while also providing insightful 'moments' that build upon the characters within.
https://www.docdroid.net/ygLlxoV/script-isolation-1.pdf.html
Considering this is my first draft I was actually quite happy with how it came out, and I patiently awaited Steve Coombes' 1 to 1 feedback session in order to gain a better grasp at what was good and what could be improved in order to sustain a neat, interesting and unique flow from beginning, middle and end; while also providing insightful 'moments' that build upon the characters within.
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